Current V1
Subject
You're Gaining Ground
Body
Hi [name], You're 1/4 of the way toward your goal, so take a moment to celebrate your wins. Keep setting the pace, as every milestone gets you closer to changing the world.
V1.1 Quick Fix
Preheader
25% done. Here's the one thing to do right now.
Body
UnchangedHi [name], You're 1/4 of the way toward your goal, so take a moment to celebrate your wins. Keep setting the pace, as every milestone gets you closer to changing the world.
CTA
New button
"Share your progress"
V2 Rewrite
Subject A
You're a quarter of the way there, [first name]
Subject B
25% down. Here's what to do next.
Preheader
25% done. Here's the one thing to do right now.
Body
25% of your goal is in. That's real momentum. The fastest way to get from 25% to 50% isn't finding new donors. It's activating the ones you already have.
Caption
"I'm 25% to my fundraising goal for [cause]. Every donation counts. Here's my page if you want to back me: [link]"
V3 Vision IN-PRODUCT
In V3
No CIO email. Platform notification only when 25% hit.
Platform rewards
Impact dashboard access unlocks
"25% there" progress card
Strava impact stickers
Leaderboard position reveal
Why
Keeps journey rich without email fatigue. Platform handles delivery.
Sends: 9,514 (largest milestone)
V1.1: Preheader + from name + button
V2 asset: 25% progress card (not yet built)